Nadaa Alaya

[jediman]

Character’s Name:Nadaa Alaya

Age:26

Gender:Female

Race:Human

Personality:Happy and cheerful, but can become extremely serious when needed.

Description:Slim, semi-al with a pretty fce and sparkly blue eyes.

History or Past:Served faithfully in the GCW for the eintire time she could serve to the Alliance.

Alliance:Alliance/Jedi

Rank:Master

Lightsaber Design:Sinlge

Lightsaber Color:Turquoise

Lightsaber Form:Ataru/Vapaad

[Sanus Compleo]

Alright, not to make your time here be unpleasant, but there are several things wrong with your profile. In the rules it states, that at this time, no one, may be a Master, and Vapaad is reserved for Masters only. Your history is far too short, a history must be "at least one paragraph long...". That's all I can see wrong with your post. Once you revise this, I'm sure your profile will be approved. I hope that you will revise this and have fun RPing here with the rest of us.

Thanks.

[Force_Flow]

Yeah, I'll have to agree with Sanus. I would suggest you take the time and write some more lines out. Like, what color is her hair? How would she rerspond to stress? And soforth. Please read the rules before making the character, though. As Sanus stated, Vaapad is Master's only, and nobody's allowed to be a Master at this time. Sorry.

If you do revise it, send me a PM and I'll read it over.

Thanks,

Force_Flow